The mountain

Snow was rushing down me like an asteroid hitting Earth. I was towering over splinter size houses, and minuscule people. Standing safely on my valley, you realize I’m conquerable, but you’ll be a fool to try…… 

It has been a while since someone tried to conquer me, and I will not let anyone cross my peak.  

It has been untouched for century’s, and will remain untouched…… Through the snow storm, you could hear the climber’s feat making crunching sounds while their feet imprint in the snow.  

Reaching the atmosphere, I stand strong tall and brave. 

The climbers could see a faint light from the sun, making them think, “one day we will make it… 

Poppy Williams  

7 thoughts on “The mountain

  1. i really like it,
    maybe for this bit “It has been untouched for century’s, and will remain untouched……” you could do “and it will stay like this” instead of and will remain untouched

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