The Dreaded Mountain

Mountains are magnificent: the views are stunning.  The mountain range is important to us; I personally think that you should climb Mount Everest because it can help you keep mentally and physically fit!  

If you climb Everest, you have the outstanding opportunity to keep yourself healthy due to the exercise you will have to do. Although, some people think it’s dangerous to climb this majestic mountain, it can also be good for you and your health. Training for three to four hours a day can give you a bigger and better boost for climbing this monster as well as your general health 

Another reason that you should climb Everest is that you can push yourself to the limits and build up your strength. It doesn’t really matter how old you are because the youngest person to climb the mountain was a thirteen-year-old boy named Jordan Romero from America. The oldest person was an incredible eighty years old!  

You wont starve either because there are base camps. At the wonderful, cold camps you will be able to eat, drink and sleep until you set off again. Do you want a chance to climb the colossal mountain? It is not for the faint hearted as this challenge is immense.  

Something to think about…there are also avalanches, so watch out! Avalanches can be deadly! They are huge piles of snow that can topple you over and they often flatten everything in their way. These are something that mountaineers NEED to watch out for. The mountain climbers will also need to check the weather forecast before they set off again. The Himalayas are notorious for weather changes. One moment it can be the sunniest day, but the next moment storms are upon you. If you ignore the weather changes you could lose your life!  

Nepal people are very poor. People who climb Everest help Nepal’s local income of money as they receive money from the mountaineers as they help climbers achieve their dreams. In addition, they help by buying equipment and transport. This really helps the residents from Nepal and the country itself.  

Mountain Adventure

The mountain was as tall as a giant it was too colossal and very scary to climb. The ice was like lots of clear glass shattering as it falls and the ice shard were too sharp to touch. The rocks were like iron because they were strong and tough, they were everywhere on the mountain it was laborious to climb. The beast looked lager every step you took and every time I think I should go down. Every second rocks of iron and boulders were falling down the mountain they were terrified. The explores finally made it to the top of the mountain and shouted we have made it.  

The mountain

Snow was rushing down me like an asteroid hitting Earth. I was towering over splinter size houses, and minuscule people. Standing safely on my valley, you realize I’m conquerable, but you’ll be a fool to try…… 

It has been a while since someone tried to conquer me, and I will not let anyone cross my peak.  

It has been untouched for century’s, and will remain untouched…… Through the snow storm, you could hear the climber’s feat making crunching sounds while their feet imprint in the snow.  

Reaching the atmosphere, I stand strong tall and brave. 

The climbers could see a faint light from the sun, making them think, “one day we will make it… 

Poppy Williams  

My mountain poem

Around the stone, grey hills ice cold snow rapidly slides down the menace mountain. 

A small path leads up to a heavenly looking place. 

Eventually, someone would get hold of my eye-catching peak. 

Ice like glass spikes down like a trap as sharp as a knife blade. 

Haunting, eerie I stand still for centuries doing nothing, but waiting for climbers! 

At the peak of me there is a mystical place were no happiness can be or will never be! 

There are so many dreams, people that want to reach the top but never did. 

Manny people tried conquering me but never reached my treacherous summit. 

The life-threatening mountain, looks over the snow slithering down the colossal land. 

Screams heard that make you get a feeling that you are being watched and feeling ominous. 

People, vanishing when they try conquering me, and not reaching me untouched peak. 

I will summon my army that will kill you with frost bite, or worse! 

Nervously, menacing humans approach me with fear, and violent movements.  


When you try to conquer me, you will fail. When you try to take anything from me you will fall. 

You can’t climb me you can’t face me wrath you will get destroyed by the avalanche of eternity. 

I am your worst nightmare combined. My ancient icicles will cut you into oblivion.